Nice message...

Often I think so too when seeing any couples kissing and especially sobbering for hours... >>'''

The picture makes you think properly about that topic, good work! I guess love (or love in the way that you mean in this case) is only beautiful as long as you don't have to watch it. ~____~

Nice picture :3

The face isn't absolutely correct but telling that it looks like shit isn't the right thing to do I think. o___o'

I guess SirCannabisClock meant that the right eye brow (from our point of view) should be positioned a bit more left. Moreover the eye lids are missing. Yeah I know, people often say that they aren't that important but leaving them away lets manga characters look like aliens. ^^'
The form of the hairline is quite irregular.

But it's really good that the face anatomy still looks so harmonic which is difficult to reach I think.

Maybe thats part of your drawing style but the shoulders are a bit large I personally think. If you want to let your drawing style look more manga-typical you should draw womens' shoulders smaller.

But don't give up hope yet! You obviously already gained lots of drawing skills and by trying to avoid previous mistakes your pictures will definitely get even better.